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:icondetea:
I like for you to be still
It is as though you are absent
And you hear me from far away
And my voice does not touch you
It seems as though your eyes had flown away
And it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth
As all things are filled with my soul
You emerge from the things
Filled with my soul
You are like my soul
A butterfly of dream
And you are like the word: Melancholy

I like for you to be still
And you seem far away
It sounds as though you are lamenting
A butterfly cooing like a dove
And you hear me from far away
And my voice does not reach you
Let me come to be still in your silence
And let me talk to you with your silence
That is bright as a lamp
Simple, as a ring
You are like the night
With its stillness and constellations
Your silence is that of a star
As remote and candid

I like for you to be still
It is as though you are absent
Distant and full of sorrow
So you would've died
One word then, One smile is enough
And I'm happy;
Happy that it's not true

—Pablo Neruda
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:iconnykol-haebrd:
~nykol-haebrd Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the mood in this one, suggested by the title.
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:icondetea:
*DeTea Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, Nicole :-)
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:iconnykol-haebrd:
~nykol-haebrd Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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:iconpeinturealuile:
*peinturealuile Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work !Pretty colors:D:
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:icondetea:
*DeTea Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, Jo :-)
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:iconpeinturealuile:
*peinturealuile Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome Doug :D:
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*Undead-Academy Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice one looks like an slice of orange :)
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:icondetea:
*DeTea Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :-)
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:iconundead-academy:
*Undead-Academy Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure :)
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:iconmistersingh:
Looking good :)
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